我怎麼能分析我研究論文或技術報告觀眾的需要? / 是什麼通用策略讓我成為一個更好的科技作家? : 研究生英文投稿日報 5/19/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

*我怎麼能分析我研究論文或技術報告觀眾的需要? (PART B)

*是什麼通用策略讓我成為一個更好的科技作家?(PART B)

*學術英文投稿教學影片 (120) : Reading Scholarly Journal Articles

*與技術授權公司洽商: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

*工程英文問題描述 (97) (上)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

我怎麼能分析我研究論文或技術報告觀眾的需要? (PART B)

*非正式分析間接收集有關觀眾的信息,經由:

– 與營銷,開發,和其他有權訪問客戶工作人員的談話

– 閱讀曾與觀眾接觸的培訓人員或維修人員的筆記報告

– 閱讀有關本產品,行業或觀眾的期刊

– 與讀取最後文件人士的非正式談話

Science and Technical Writng : A Manual of Style by Philip Rubens (1.2-1.4)

是什麼通用策略讓我成為一個更好的科技作家?(PART B)

*使用邏輯和技術信息,而不是典故,比喻,或情感。

*和來自權威的說法相比,美國讀者更相信數字數據,如統計,美元數額或百分比。

*使用適當水平的形式:考慮你的聽眾,你的主題,你的目的。通常情況下,電子郵件和備忘錄和研究論文和提案相比則不那麼正式。所以要避免過於正式的話,專注於簡潔明白的文字。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 742 )

學術英文投稿教學影片 (120) : Reading Scholarly Journal Articles
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

與技術授權公司洽商: 有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件

Union Chemical Laboratories (UCL), the organization I am currently working with, has been entrusted by the R.O.C. Government to develop key technologies that can upgrade Taiwan’s chemical industries. UCL is highly interested in developing diagnostic kits that utilize biotechnological reagents, such as the nucleic acid gene probe.

In addition to our in-house R&D, we are also considering the possibility of transfer from a foreign company of a technology that is ready for or close to commercialization, and that is already under patent protection. ABC’s Biotechnology Group has developed some interesting products that we would like to know more about before reaching the licensing stage.

I suggest that ABC send a technical expert to UCL before the end of July to give a presentation to our scientists and technical staff. Because our product/technique evaluation results were so positive, we are excited about the possibility of forming a strategic alliance comprised of the ROC Government, UCL, local companies, and ABC Corporation to co-develop these products. I look forward to hearing from you.

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德

工程英文問題描述 (97) (上)

*工程提案建構 : 你工程提案的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭工程提案的內容嗎?

*工程問題 : 你的工程提案裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

*工程問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制 ?

*工程問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對工程提案的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

*工程計劃需求 : 根據以上問題,最迫切的計劃需求是什麼?

工程英文問題描述

工程計劃建構 Direct methanol fuel cell (DMFC) is a highly feasible alternative for portable energy supply owing to its high power density, efficient start up time, and liquid fuel fed mechanism. 工程計劃問題 However, the development of DMFC is limited mainly by the slow kinetics of methanol oxidation reaction (MOR), i.e. a series of proton stripping processes that ultimately leave carbon monoxide adherent to a catalyst (normally platinum), a phenomenon known as catalyst poisoning. Among the many approaches developed to facilitate MOR include adding Ruthenium as a second alloy and Ruthenium oxide. Unfortunately, the effect is limited and Ru is relatively expensive. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe characteristics of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 工程計劃問題的量化 As is generally assumed, the hole- electron pairs ejected from TiO2 under UV illumination participate in the degradation o nearby organics. Additionally, Pt can function as a sink of electrons to prevent the recombination of hole- electron pairs, facilitating the release of additional holes involved in organic degradation. Despite a recent finding that Pt-TiO2 facilitates the above-mentioned degradation of UV induced organics, high power Hg lamps (over 100 W) are required to drive Pt-TiO2 photo-electrodes in order to observe a significant increase in the current in DMFC. 工程計劃問題的中心 The inability to reduce the excitation power source to a certain order (~W) makes it impossible to commercialize the photo-electrochemical fuel cell for portable energy applications. 工程計劃需求 Therefore, the feasibility of improving the junction stability of Pt and TiO2 must be investigated to increase significantly the current under low power UV illumination.

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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