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*商用英文問題描述 (46) (上)
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學術英文投稿教學影片 (114) : Scientific Writing
ABC is internationally renowned for its precision in measurement standards. Your division, the Mechanical and Optical Metrology Division, is also known as one of the best laboratories in this field.
I would like to apply to serve as a guest worker in your Division, during the months between December 1992 and June 1993.
I have already been allotted half a year to conduct research work at another institution. All related expenses would be covered by my institute, the Center for Measurement Standards.
The enclosed resume provides further information on my educational background in physics, and my recent professional experience in laser frequency stabilization and laser scanning microscopes. I am particularly interested in studying laser frequency stabilization at your laboratory. However, I am open to being assigned to any project which is relevant to my background experiences.
I look forward to our future cooperation and appreciate your thoughtful deliberation in considering this application.
商用英文問題描述 (46) (上)
*商用提案建構 : 你商用提案的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭商用提案的內容嗎?
*商用問題 : 你的商用提案裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?
*商用問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制 ?
*問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對商用提案的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?
*商用計劃需求 : 根據以上問題,最迫切的計劃需求是什麼?
商用提案建構 The extremely competitive medical market sector in Taiwan and budget deficits incurred from the island’s National Health Insurance scheme have led to the implementation of a Global Budget System. Whereas hospitals heavily prioritize allotting resources efficiently, the resources utility rate has received increasing attention. Thus, hospitals must concentrate their operational efforts on retaining current patients and increasing the utility rate of those resources that hospitals already possess. 商用問題 Of the relatively few studies examining the medical sector in this area, conventional approaches calculate the number of outpatients, inpatients and visits to emergency service without considering the payment policy in the Global Budget System. (NOTE : Add 2-4 sentences that describe characteristics of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 商用問題的量化 The inability to effectively address the utility rate of resources would make the statistical approaches used to determine the samples in resource policies inaccurate. 問題的中心 Incapable of determining the utility rate of resources, hospitals will expend considerable costs to maintain nullity of resources and reduce the amount of subsidized revenues from the National Health Insurance scheme, ultimately lowering their competitiveness. 商用計劃需求 Therefore, a novel assessment model must be developed to identify the utility rate of resources in the medical sector for enhancing hospital operations. More specifically, the proposed model must incorporate a novel set of management strategies that emphasize allotting resources within the medical sector to strengthen a hospital’s competitiveness in order to comply with the Global Budget System.