科技訓練細節解釋 (科技訓練請求信函) (有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) : 研究生英文投稿日報 3/15/2014

研究生英文投稿日報:

* 科技訓練細節解釋 (科技訓練請求信函) (有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) (PART A)

* 科技訓練細節解釋 (科技訓練請求信函) (有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) (PART B)

* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (55) : Journal publication writing

* 英文摘要撰寫(中)

* 商用英文假設描述 (33) (下)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

科技訓練細節解釋 (科技訓練請求信函) (有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) (PART A)

實例:

* Specifically, we are concerned with how to effectively adopt the latest construction engineering approaches.
更明確地,我們關心的是如何有效地採用最先進的營造工程技術。

* If given the opportunity, I would like exposure to the following topics:
如果有機會,我會想要探討下列的主題

* As for my accommodation during the guest stay, I would like to lease a single-room hotel, at a range between US$150 to US$200 daily.
至於我在客座期間的住宿,我會想要在旅社租賃一間單人房,租金約每日

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德 (2007)

科技訓練細節解釋 (科技訓練請求信函) (有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) (PART B)

實例:

* If granted this opportunity, I am open to investigating related topics with your highly skilled staff.
如果我得到這個機會的話,我並不排斥於和您們技術精進的員工,一起研究相關的題目。

* If possible, I hope to work directly under your supervision.
如果可能的話,我希望能在您的指導下工作。

有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件 柯泰德 (2007)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (55) : Journal publication writing
觀看本學術英文投稿教學影片以加強英文寫作投稿能力

英文摘要撰寫(中)

A. 簡介背景 (研究建構+研究問題) B. 目標C. 方法 D. 歸納希望的結果及 E. 其對特定領域的貢獻

簡介背景 (研究建構+研究問題) Coronary artery angiography (CAG) can not divide the severity of left main coronary artery (LMCA) with plaque or fibrous lesion, making impossible an appropriate and immediate treatment strategy and necessitating an alternative means of determining the severity of a lesion to prescribe such a strategy. In practice, CAG displays coronary arteries by combining an x-ray intensity of 100~150 kVp and 10 mAs, making it further impossible to acquire the images of plaque and fibrous lesion with a low intensity X-ray and explaining why the severity of the lesion is often underestimated. For overcoming this problem, although scanning these images with intra-vessel ultrasound (IVUS) is a feasible alternative, how to define an accurate stenosis rate when calculating the cross-section area ratio is problematic. 目標 Therefore, this study attempts to determine the ratio of the plaque and fibrous lesion to CSA in order to enable medical personnel to assess the severity of a lesion. 方法 Severity of a lesion is determined based on the melanized value of the x-ray penetrating various density materials. The vessel lumen is then directly scanned using IVUS and, in doing so, not only divides different stenosis rates but also displays the anatomy three-dimensionally. 歸納希望的結果及 Analysis results demonstrate the effectiveness of IVUS scanning in providing a safe and accurate means of diagnosing patients, enabling medical personnel to prescribe accurate treatment based on IVUS results. 其對特定領域的貢獻 In contrast with CAG, IVUS is a safe, immediate and precise diagnosis method that can not only facilitate an evaluation of lesions in the LMCA, but also enable cardiologists to effectively treat patients and, ultimately lower the mortality rate of CAD patients and medical expenses.

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

商用英文假設描述 (33) (下)

* 商用目標 : 商用提案的目標 ?

* 達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

* 希望的結果 : 希望的結果你希望達成的結果?

* 領域的貢獻 : 你的提案對相關商用領域的貢獻?

商用英文假設描述:

商用目標 Two forecasting models can be developed to estimate the market demand of the elderly population in Taiwan with respect to the available resources in the long-term healthcare sector. 商用目標的方法 To do so, a multi-regression model can be developed to measure and forecast not only the quantity of the elderly population in Taiwan, but also the relationship between the elderly population variation and critical factors. Following the submission of a questionnaire to institutional managers as well as public and private sector investors, critical factors associated with commitment to the further development of Taiwan’s long term healthcare sector can then be identified from those questionnaire replies based on pertinent research from a literature review. Next, a GM (1, 1) model based on the Grey Theory can then be developed to accurately forecast the supply of Taiwan’s long term care facilities and services using data acquired from the Ministry of Interior’s website. 希望的結果 In addition to identifying relevant factors that affect the quantity of elderly population, the proposed forecasting models can also measure precisely the quantity of demand and supply of long-term healthcare resources in Taiwan. 領域的貢獻 Results of this study can provide not only a valuable reference for institutional managers, public as well as private sector investors, and academics, but also a feasible strategy for health care policy makers when devising strategies for fulfilling the demand of this rapidly growing sector. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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