實驗研究報告的內容 / 撰寫實驗報告要回答的重要問題 1/28/2014 : 研究生英文投稿日報

研究生英文投稿日報:

* 實驗研究報告的內容 (PART B)

* 撰寫實驗報告要回答的重要問題 (PART B)

* 學術英文投稿教學影片 (8): Review Process For Journal Authors

* 方案結果的總結Project Summary (商用英文 ) (PART B)

* 工程英文假設描述 (66) (下)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

實驗研究報告的內容 (PART B)

* 簡介:

– 描述假設或質疑研究試圖回答什麼

– 討論為什麼這個問題很重要

* 材料與方法:

– 說服你的讀者你的做法是恰當的

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 499 )

撰寫實驗報告要回答的重要問題 (PART B)

* 如何從你產生的數據推論進行研究?

* 什麼是你結果的理論和實際意義?

* 什麼是你結果對研究或特定工業應用領域的理論和實踐的貢獻?

* 下一個任務為何?為什麼呢?

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 492)

學術英文投稿教學影片 (8): Review Process For Journal Authors
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方案結果的總結Project Summary (商用英文 ) (PART B)

* 描述方案實行後會產生的主要成果

(參考範例)

Analysis results of this project can be used as a model for selecting the most qualified outsourcing company.? Adopting the AHP-based assessment criteria can enable hospitals to generate revenues and save on equipment investment, peripheral consumptive materials, personnel costs and utilities. Decision making based on the AHP criteria can provide a valuable reference for public hospitals that seek outsourcing partners.

(參考範例)

According to our results, the proposed CRM-based approach can identify how the medical services anticipated by families of critically ill patients differ from actual ones provided by regional hospitals, with the objective of ultimately reducing this discrepancy and patient transferal rate to larger medical centers.

* 描述對特定領域或部門的貢獻

(參考範例)

In addition to enabling Department of Health authorities to understand the full implications of outsourcing, the AHP-based assessment criteria can help public hospitals to understand the nature of problems that arise during outsourcing when constructing a deluxe health examination center.

(參考範例)

While providing regional hospital administrators with an effective means of determining the anticipated services of critically ill patients and their families, the proposed approach can highlight the importance of medical quality in emergency care, eventually increasing hospital revenues and establishing high quality emergency medical centers among regional hospitals in Taiwan.
商用英文 柯泰德

工程英文假設描述 (66) (下)

* 工程目標 : 工程提案的目標 ?

* 達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

* 希望的結果 : 希望的結果你希望達成的結果?

* 領域的貢獻 : 你的提案對相關工程領域的貢獻?

工程英文假設描述

工程計劃目標 The correlation between process parameters and product yield can be investigated. 達成目標的方法 To do so, by adopting the statistical process control (SPC) method, process parameters can be collected from the in-line WIP. Major process-related factors can then be identified using correlation analysis. Next, the product yield can be verified based on these factors. Additionally, these process parameters can be stringently controlled to decrease the loss of product yield. 希望的結果 As anticipated, while analysis results can clarify the correlation between process parameters and product yield, circuitry designers can focus on incorporating the above factors without increasing device size, 領域的貢獻 ultimately reducing the chip area and lowering the retail price. (NOTE : Add 2-3 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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