技術寫作中如何避免使用具有性別歧視的詞語 / 技術寫作避免使用行話的原因 : 研究生英文投稿日報 12/10/2013

研究生英文投稿日報:

* 技術寫作中如何避免使用具有性別歧視的詞語

* 技術寫作避免使用行話的原因

* 助研究思考及寫作的背景音樂 (331)

* 國外訓練之申請 (科技訓練)(有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) (1 of 2 )

* 工程英文問題描述 (54) (上)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

技術寫作中如何避免使用具有性別歧視的詞語

* 用無性別特定的詞語更換意指男性的詞語。

* 切換到不同的動詞形式,這樣可以盡量避免提到和性別有關的代名詞。

* 切換到名詞的複數形式,可以使用“they”或“them”,而不是“he” 或“she。”

* 切換到“he or she”,“he/she”,“s/he”,或“his or her”。

* 對讀者直接用“you”或“your”,而不是指性別的一個代名詞。

* 交替使用“he”和“she”。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 251 )

技術寫作避免使用行話的原因

* 行話不精確。

* 行話可以混淆意義。

* 行話可以被看作是居高臨下的在炫耀。

* 行話往往是嚇人的。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 244 )

助研究思考及寫作的背景音樂 (331)
Alan Hovhaness (1911年3月8日-2000年6月21日),亞美尼亞-蘇格蘭裔美國作曲家,20世紀最多產的古典音樂作曲家之一。

國外訓練之申請 (科技訓練)(有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) (1 of 2 )

技術對應的實例:

By designating ABC as my primary interest area in ASME and having received the ABC Newsletter for quite some time, I realized that CGFM would be a resourceful group for my professional interest in flow measurements.

Our institute, the Center for Measurement Standards (CMS/ITRI), has tentatively chosen mid October as the starting date to develop a national liquid and gas standard flow measurement laboratory in Taiwan, R.O.C.

The laboratory will have the following capacity rating:
Oil: up to 6,000 lpm (uncertainty: +0.1-0.4% from light to heavy oil)
Water: up to 10,000 lpm (uncertainty: +0.2%)
Air: up to 7,000 SM/hr (uncertainty: +0.25%)
Once the laboratory is developed, our work will be extended into several potential flow studies, e.g., multiphase flows, LDV, pump and fan performance, air flow in wind tunnel and CFD related scheduled programs at Atlanta, Georgia.

Could you send me information on the necessary forms for this activity? We are also interested in pursuing collaboration with your research program, based on our mutual interests. I look forward to hearing from you.

工程英文問題描述 (54) (上)

* 工程提案建構 : 你工程提案的主題是什麼? 你的讀者可以明瞭工程提案的內容嗎?

* 工程問題 : 你的工程提案裡有你試著要解決或是想更進一步瞭解的問題嗎?

* 工程問題的量化 : 你要如何量化問題來讓你的讀者明白之前文獻研究所遇到的量化限制 ?

* 工程問題的中心 : 如果問題沒被解決或是充分瞭解, 這對工程提案的讀者會有多大的負面衝擊?

* 工程計劃需求 : 根據以上問題,最迫切的計劃需求是什麼?

工程英文問題描述

工程計劃建構 Network applications enable the transmission of data, voice and images between two users, enabling them access the Internet conveniently. 工程計劃問題 However, the Internet has public access, with information easily acquired or altered by malicious hackers, thus compromising network security. (NOTE : Add 3-4 more sentences that describe characteristics of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 工程計劃問題的量化 In practice, a CPU processes all traffic by encrypting outgoing traffic and decrypting incoming traffic. An inevitably increased load will incur a loss of frames and negatively impact normal operations. 工程計劃問題的中心 A lost frame leads to the discarding of related framers, subsequently incurring the other side to re-transmit data and ultimately increasing overhead network costs. 工程計劃需求 Therefore, a novel mechanism must be developed to alleviate the above negative impact.

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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