如何參與視訊會議 / 如何批判研究合作者的工作: 研究生英文投稿日報 11/3/2013

研究生英文投稿日報:

* 如何參與視訊會議 (PART A)

* 如何批判研究合作者的工作 (PART B)

* 助研究思考及寫作的背景音樂 (294)

* 訪問時間或行程之更改 (有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) (2 of 2)

* 科學英文問題描述 / 假設描述 (25) (下)

Academic publishing news 學術出版新聞

如何參與視訊會議 (PART A)

* 練習會使用到的技術。

* 安排在每個站點有技術支持。

* 整理房間,以鼓勵參與。

– 排列的椅子讓他們面對顯示器和相機。

– 每個人都應該靠近自己的麥克風。

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 73 )

如何批判研究合作者的工作 (PART B)

* 談論文件,而不是作者。

– 粗魯:“你不解釋清楚為什麼這個標準會和主題有關。”

– 較好:“我不知道如何理解這個標準會涉及到主題。”

– 粗魯:“你為什麼不寫比較性的討論就如你先前保證你會做的?”

– 更好:“我想這個報告會變得更強有力如果我們在這裡可以和其他文件做比較。”

Technical Communication 10th Edition by Mike Markel (p. 67 )

助研究思考及寫作的背景音樂 (294)
阿沃•帕特(愛沙尼亞語:Arvo Pärt,1935年9月11日-)出生於愛沙尼亞派德,是20世紀的愛沙尼亞作曲家。他的作品以合唱聖樂最為人所知。「神聖簡約主義」的主要作曲家之一。

訪問時間或行程之更改 (有效撰寫專業英文電子郵件) (2 of 2)

技術對應的實例:

I have received your letter dated March 29 regarding a technical visit by two UCL staff members to your esteemed company. Acknowledge the arrangements already made for the technical visit. Thank you for the arrangements you have made so far.

However, the week of May 17-24 is not quite appropriate for my staff because they have prior committments.

I was wondering whether the week of May 10-17 would be acceptable to you. If so, Mr. Lin and Mr. Wu can schedule their flight to arrive in Melbourne on May 8. Could you please provide them with an itinerary so as to process their foreign visit applications?

I look forward to your prompt reply.

科學英文假設描述 (25) (下)

* 科學目標 : 科學提案的目標 ?

* 達成目標的方法 : 你的計劃中達成目標的步驟?

* 希望的結果 : 希望的結果你希望達成的結果?

* 領域的貢獻 : 你的提案對相關科學領域的貢獻?

科學英文假設描述

科學計劃目標 A novel formulation involving the use of Chinese herbal medicine can be developed to replace that of the widely used South African herbal medicine. 達成目標的方法 To do so, Chinese herbal medicine can be analyzed to suppress gram (-) bacteria. Cell culturing method is then adopted to understand why Chinese herbal medicine does not have negative side effects. Next, GC and HPLC methods can be used to understand the adaptability of incorporating compounds of Chinese medicine in shampoo. The proposed formulation can enable five varieties of Chinese herbal medicine to achieve a better outcome than South African herbal medicine can in terms of suppressing gram (-) bacteria. 希望的結果 As anticipated, analysis results can indicate that , while traditional South African herbs can restrain the microorganism effect with a success rate of 90% upwards, Chinese herbs have the same success rate of 99% upwards. This quality makes Chinese herbs highly promising for efforts to restrain microorganisms and achieve safe testing, implying safe production and substantial product revenues. The ability to suppress germs would enable use of flow cytometer examination PGE2 to understand its anti-oxidation activity, thus making Chinese herb medicine highly promising for several commercial applications, including treatment for athlete’s foot and the skin of head tinea owing to its ability to effectively suppress fungi, as well as treatment of external injuries owing to its ability as a disinfectant of germs. 領域的貢獻 In addition to providing a valuable reference for Chinese herbal medicine research, the proposed formulation can provide local healthcare product manufacturers with a viable alternative to developing shampoos. Its desirable features of effectively suppressing both fungi and fungi owing to its anti-oxidation capability further increase its commercial potential. (NOTE : Add 2 sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method contributes to a particular field or sector)

Source: 有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

密集課程 (柯泰德): Organizing Technical Research Papers(科技研究論文組織寫作)

密集課程 (柯泰德):Developing Copyediting Skills(英文編修訓練)

有效撰寫英文工作提案 柯泰德

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